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My poem
Apr 25, 2005 20:55:21 GMT -5
Post by Tarantula4Life on Apr 25, 2005 20:55:21 GMT -5
Before you start to read it I'll just tell you that it is NOT a love poem. It's about music. Okay...
You help me through the hard times and remind me of the good times. You comfort me when I'm crying, you cheer me up when I feel like dying, And when I'm in trouble you protect me. You show me how good life could be, And you've shown me how to live right. You'll even sing me to sleep at night. You mean more to me than anything else, In fact, you matter more to me than life itself. You are everything, you are my whole life Without you I don't think I'd survive. I don't want to follow the latest trend I just wanna love you 'til the very end.
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My poem
Apr 26, 2005 8:48:06 GMT -5
Post by Whatername on Apr 26, 2005 8:48:06 GMT -5
thats beautiful.
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My poem
Apr 26, 2005 17:45:26 GMT -5
Post by Krazy Cheesecake on Apr 26, 2005 17:45:26 GMT -5
It's awesome, I love it. Especially the fact that though it sounds like a love poem it's actually about music. And I love the "You'll even sing me to sleep at night" part because it literally does. ;D
I've tried poetry. I suppose I'm not too bad, but I end up losing all my poems on my computer, never to be found again.
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My poem
Apr 26, 2005 18:32:14 GMT -5
Post by Tarantula4Life on Apr 26, 2005 18:32:14 GMT -5
Thanks. Yeah, I normally lose my poems on my computer too. So now I've started writing them out by hand as well.
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Post by teapot on May 8, 2005 9:27:36 GMT -5
it was ok,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
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